привет,
Well, this text I'll write in English, I'm not good in Russian enough
Ok, so firstly I must tell You that Your works are amazing for your age, really talented hand
I mean as well technique as conceptions. About technique I have a lot of things to say, of course, I see sometimes You loose sense of proportion in some parts of face, but this is a thing that You must notice yourself and I think it'll come with time. Then, I noticed a little not enough some... lightness of line, if You know what I mean, especially in parts of face as noses, sometimes lips and contours of the face, as cheek or chin.
All in all, I think YOU'RE GREAT and You MUST draw still, don't loose such a talent!
Greetings from Poland
P.s. I'd be happy if You want to write to me soon, I'm learning Russian in school and I want to practice writing, so I'm looking for some people to converse with.